Popular events like football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Popular sporting occasions help to maintain the peace and a better relationship between the countries but it would remain intact unless and until participants keep it a healthy competition. Therefore I partly agree to the statement.
Till few decade back, wars between countries did nothing but created chaos, unnecessary loss of lives, waste of resources and international tensions. But now time has changed, World Cup and different sporting events are organized to create a healthy relationship among the countries. These are kind of wars with certain rules and restricted with time. There is no loss of lives, rather the resources are utilized properly and talents of people are channelized in a proper manner. Some countries win the title and some lose, but this defeat helps to do better in the next event. For example Olympics are organized every 5 years. By participating in these competitions we get to know about different people from different countries and it also helps to understand their culture and traditions. Apart from that representing our country on international level is the most proud thing one could ever experience.
But on their other hand the greed to win the competitions forces the participant to use illegal way or by heinous means. For example some participants bribe the judges or the referee to give the decision on their side. Apart from this, sometimes participants get addicted to weed and drugs which not only depletes their health but also leads to disobeying rules of the tournament. Also abusing other players, bullying them and using profane language with judges, organizers and participants’ results in disharmony with other countries.
Therefore in conclusion, I think popular events and international tournaments help to maintain the peace and harmony internationally, but restrictions should be more strict to stop illegal means to win a competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32225913621 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02299294246 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9328233631 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154297449457 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477021581479 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035015972859 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881605779311 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135001534688 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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