Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Music is a piece of art which cannot be defined in a single word. Every emotion, feeling, situation can be explained by the means of music. It can be used to calm someone or can even be used to end a fight. Hence I agree to the statement that music brings people of different culture and ages.
The epitome to bring people of various age groups is music. Nowadays many singing reality shows are organized in many countries. Like in India most watched shows are Indian Idol, The Voice etc. These are completely family shows and people from any age group can watch these. Moreover everyone in the family irrespective of the age group likes these shows due to the combination of old as well as new music the contestant choose which also increases the bonding in the family. Hence Music brings the whole family together.
However music also unites different cultures in the society. In India many festivals are celebrated together by different cultures in the society. For example, Navratri is a Gujrati festival but it is celebrated across India. The main reason for this is the tradition in which people dance in front of idol of Durga, an Indian deity with a touch of Gujrati style music. This cannot be seen only in Navratri but almost in every festival with a similar tradition. Therefore music unites people from different cultures.
Hence, I agree to the statement that music can create a good relationship between people of different age and culture together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, third, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72395833333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73063235929 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453125 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2847298578 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152751590765 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779666306475 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690808350551 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131085660909 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458568759118 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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