The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
Not surprisingly, many aspects of people's daily lives have undergone considerable changes because of the recent development of business and technology. There is a new trend that people having multi professions and higher education. On the other hand, having only one job throughout life is becoming out-of-date.
This probably the most obvious reason why people keep several jobs and further education is that having a higher and extra income. However, the benefits of higher education in the 21 century are not just career-oriented, but it also trains you to think analytically, understand the subjects which are complex and have the ability to communicate effectively.
Having a multitude of skills in various fields can not only help you land the job in the world, but it can also make your business and trade in the country much easier. Around the world, the employer prefers to have smaller or medium-sized company that stuff with different experiences and resumes. Therefore people need to have constant study and improve their ability in modern life so helps them to have more advantages. For example, computational linguistics expertise it would be best if he had experienced in the field of linguistics, computer science and neuroscience.
To summarize, the discussion makes it clear the science and technology open new avenues so people must be up _to _date new data and skills and have multiple jobs to adopt the present age. This fashion is becoming more and more popular because it causes lavish lifestyle, personal achievement and higher rank in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...with different experiences and resumes. Therefore people need to have constant study and ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22834645669 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90510634561 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0567033816 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22833593832 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826869993895 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355019116487 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131429276503 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125920286549 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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