The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The diagram gives information about the process of forecasting the weather in the Australian Bureau of Meteorology and reports it in the public media at the moment.
There are four stages in the process, initially, gathering data through different channels. Then these raw information sends three various ways for analyzing, preparing for a presentation, and finally broadcast to mass media.
Looking at first stage collecting data is including satellite, radar and drifting buoy. Satellite incoming information can be received as satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart respectively. The same data can be passed to a radar center to radar screen directly. Finally, the other sources of information shown in the synoptic chart are drifting buoy and radar station.
According to the figure, in the third phase all data and analysis send to the central computer to classify and prepare the reliable forecasts about the weather. At the end, it's delivered Tv news, radio and recorded telephone announcements to present in public.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85857792688 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5068298364 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158735046012 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062515106325 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728899474874 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105833394516 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080582363978 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.