The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Recently, the phenomenon of having several careers and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas some people believe that it is rather out-of-date to have a single career, others are of the opinion that they ought to eke out living via multiple careers or ways. In my mind, today’s modern humans must have different sources to make money, due to economical issues as well as psychological matters.
Obviously, nowadays having a single source of income doesn’t make sense because of huge expenditures of life in frantic, competitive societies. Consequently, both parents need to strive at workplace, whether part-time or full-time, if they hope to experience an appropriate level of life. Unlike women, it is more likely that loads of men should ponder about having two, or even more than two, ways of earning money as the burdens of life are on shoulders of men across most communities.
Moreover, colossal number of employees and workers don’t be satisfied by their current vocations, while they have to endure their unpleasant jobs thanks to vital income. Thus, it is far better to follow their favorite exercises along with main positions. Struggling with pleasant activities, such as art works, creating wooden artefacts, and so forth paves the way to be gratified of their life, and perhaps earnings.
On the other hand, during the 21st century, more and more people have decided to educate for its own sake, not for other purposes, namely, job promotions, expanding their salaries, or grabbing better positions. According to surveys, the number of elderly individuals who pursue their education at colleges or universities has gone up remarkably, albeit they don’t need those types of degrees. Ergo, we shouldn’t lose sight of numerous grandparents who become classmates with their grandchildren.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments about cons and pros of having more than one career, I opt to vigorously support the idea that making living via multiple careers in not only a new-fashion but also a necessity. By the way, family hours and spending adequate amount of time with friends for recreation should be taken into consideration.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas some p...
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Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...different sources to make money, due to economical issues as well as psychological matters...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, such as, as well as, by the way, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86286402824 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661931818182 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.9963368243 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.571428571 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273094890677 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796029098451 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568781939763 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137105669453 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633163162239 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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