The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar graph shows the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad in given period of time . The line graph shows Australia's share of Japanese tourists market.

It is critical clear that, in 1985 5 million Japanese travelled abroad and the numbers of traveling abroad were gradually rised till 1995. Whilst, in 1992 to 1993 number of traveler were almost same. The number of Japanese tourists were on zenith in 1995.

Moving ahead, 2 percent Japanese reached Australia in 1925 and the percentage were increased till 1988. While, the percentage decreased in 1989 and the percentage of Japanese visiting Australia increased gradually till 1993. Then it fell down I. 1994.

At the end, tourists from Japan travelling abroad and number of Japanese visiting Australia was increased in 1985 to 1995.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24031007752 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53057048553 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3871500857 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1111111111 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384806167232 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187768501334 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122158523987 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263438502875 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107401876988 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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