The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart represents the data about number of Japanese travelling abroad over the period 1985 to 1995, whereas the line graph shows the information about tourists of Japan visiting Australia. The general overview here is that the Japanese tourists travelling abroad was increasing year by year and percentage of Japanese visiting Australia increasing too.
To specify, from the bar graph it can be seen that the number of tourists from Japan travelling abroad was increasing from 1985 to 1990. However, in 1991, there was a slight decrease from 11 to around 10 millions of people. In addition, ...
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over the period 1985 to 1995
over the period between 1985 to 1995
and percentage of Japanese visiting Australia increasing too.
and the percentage of Japanese visiting Australia is increasing too.
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