this bar chart shows Japanese tourists travelling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and line chart show percentage of Japanese visits to Australia. Bar charts shows increase of Japanese travelers to Australia and highest peak of travelers detected in the year of 1995 where 15 millions Japanese travel abroad. In 1985 only 5 millions tourists travel abroad which was lowest number of travelers as compared to other years but as years passes Japanese develop interest in travelling and therefore it increased and lead to 15 millions in 1995.
Other line chart shows Australia's visits of japan's tourists market and percentage of tourists coming to Australia. it observes that tourists coming to Australia increases from year 1985 but later on there is slightly decrease in 1989 and 4.8% visitors coming to Australia reduce to 4.1%. In 1994 slowly decrease in percentage is again observed.Peak time of japanese coming to Australia is in 1993 where 6.1% tourists visit there.
it is observed that from 1985 to 1995 there is a gradual increase in Japanese tourists going abroad and coming to Australia. in this duration minor decrease observed in 1989 and 1994 ( line graph).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12105263158 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59501439745 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457894736842 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7990796136 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.625 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373771101376 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203910032132 0.103423049105 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113324349552 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256897773207 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820835673188 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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