The given charts depict the information about proportion of budget spent by a family eating at home and restaurants during 30 year period ;from 1970 to 2000 whereas graph illustrates the information about the meals eaten by a family at fast food and sitdown restaurants .
Overall,it is evident that eating habits were changed over the time, People nowadays prefer to eat at restaurants instead of wasting their time in cooking at home.
It can be seen that, only 10 percentile of money was spent on eating at restaurants in the year 1970 which was further increased upto 5/ in the following year.Apart from that ,this trend of eating at restaurants rocketed upto 35/and 50/in the year 1990 and 2000 respectively.
Moreover, the line graph reveals that the number of meals consumed by family in fast food and sitdown reastaurants were initially at the same level. In the year1980 1990 the number of meals at fast food reastaurants were inclined to 25 and 50 respectively however it was at the peak in the year 2000.Although ,the trend of eating at sitdown restaurants was barely inclined upto 50.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90860215054 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75933756159 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543010752688 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4063666617 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.6 112.824112599 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2 22.9334400587 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266687907925 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166232364053 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786700088414 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170639407942 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899265063432 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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