The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world
These six pie charts illustrate the proportion of water used for three different purposes in six regions of the world.
Overall, it is clear that almost all areas use water for agricultural purposes and all regions least likely use the water for domestic purposes.
To begin with, Central Asia has the highest proportion of the use of water in their agricultural sector at 88%, followed by Africa and South East Asia at 84% and 81%, respectively. In contrast, South America's use of water in their agriculture is just above three-quarters, wherein it is more than half of the proportion for North America and Europe.
With regards to industrial use, Europe is leading at 53%, followed by North America, having only one in twenty difference. South East Asia and South America almost has a similar percentage for their Industrial purposes at 12% and 10%, accordingly and the two areas has less than one in ten in proportion. On the other hand, South America Europe and South America use more water for domestic purposes compared to Central Asia, South East Asia and Africa.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'regions the least'.
Suggestion: regions the least
...water for agricultural purposes and all regions least likely use the water for domestic purpo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96685082873 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65326854067 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513812154696 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9514815698 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.428571429 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321478629749 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174457667513 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143295448022 0.0843802449381 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254255966305 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14379775828 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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