The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main comparisons where relevant.

The charts illustrate the percentage of water usage for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes in different parts of the world.

Overall, people used considerably more water for agriculture in the central and south-eastern parts of Asia, Africa and South America while the biggest portion of water usage was formed by industrial use in North America and Europe.

Turning to the details, in Central Asia, South East Asia and Africa, agricultural use accounted for almost the same percentage of total water usage, showing 88%, 81% and 84% respectively. In comparison, in South America, the largest share, 71%, was accounted for by agricultural use. The second largest portion was formed by domestic use in Central Asia, Africa and South America, being 7%, 9% and 19% respectively. In South East Asia, meanwhile, although people used 7% of water for domestic purposes as in Central Asia, it accounted for the smallest share after industrial use (12%).

Looking more closely to the figures of North America and Europe, it can be noticed that the percentage of water used for three purposes was nearly identical in these areas of the world. Industrial use accounted for about half of total water usage in North America and Europe. Domestic use was also the same, 13% for North America and 15% for Europe.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14485981308 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68024364574 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439252336449 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0217236759 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239005630519 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136066687173 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671485562363 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184327075282 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646761723055 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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