The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate water consumption in 6 different areas across the globe based on three main sectors: Agricultural, domestic and industrial. In most of the areas, the greatest water consumption is due to agricultural demand, while the least is because of domestic demand.

As countries in Europe and North America are industrialized, the percentage of industrial water consumption is not only higher than those of the other four areas but also greater than domestic and agricultural use. In Europe industrial utilization of water with 53% surpasses domestic and agricultural combined with 53%.

On the other hand, African, South American and Asian countries are more likely depending on farming. Therefore, water consumption for agricultural irrigation has the greatest share in this area, ranging between 71% in South America and 88% in Central Asia. Moreover, in Europe and North America, the demand of water for agricultural reasons is 32% and 39% respectively. The domestic use of water is at large in South America with 19 percent. Meanwhile, in the other five areas the range if domestic exploitation is between 7% in both Central and South East Asia and 15% in Europe.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27368421053 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98704961023 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6353640856 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135546495941 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621996787949 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444489222382 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977906380925 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157308680008 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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