The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The charts delineate the proportion of water utilized by six different countries for industrial, agricultural, and domestic use.

In general, what stands out is that each nation uses water for irrigation in large quantity, whilst having an exception for North America and Europe where the industry uses a greater amount of water than other sectors.

Focusing on America, North America uses greater than one-third portion of the water in agriculture, while the approximately twice amount of water is used in South America for the same. In contrast, Aisa uses more than two-third part of the water in farms, precisely 88 percent and 81 percent by Central Asia and South East Asia respectively.

On the other hand, a similar trend is observed in other nations such as Africa, to be accurate 84 percent of water is utilized in agriculture whereas Europe uses more than half the water supply in industries. Water used for domestic purposes is at a lower rate than other nations, having an exceptional case for South America where a greater percentage of water is used in agriculture followed by domestic use and one-tenth portion is used in industries.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast, in general, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08947368421 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75572936286 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521052631579 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0914170745 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 5.23603664747 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304919360667 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176896826744 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916061692083 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216875781353 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068312412602 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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