The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts explain the information about the consumption of water for different purposes by various countries in the world in terms of percentages.
Overall, it is clear that all the six different countries consumed most of the water for agriculture purposes, whereas they utilized less proportion for industrial and domestic uses.
In detail, People all over the nations had made a significant proportion of water used for farming purposes. North America used only 39% of the total proportion, whereas the other side of the continent reached a value of 70%. However, British people’s usage counted for over three-tenths of all. Drastic spurge was seen in other parts of the universe such as Asia, Central Asia, and South East Asia with 84%, 88%, and 81% respectively.
Moreover, the percentage of water used by America, Europe, Africa, and Asian continents for the Industrial sector was 8%, 10%, 55%, 7%, 5%, and 12% respectively.
Furthermore, water used for domestic purposes by the individuals in the United States was close to one-sixth of overall proportions, then there was a sudden drop seen in the United Kingdom to 15%. Admittedly, African people used water only for 9%, whereas the remaining nations such as Central and East Asia remained at the same value which is only 7% of the total proportion.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79451746217 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2093001412 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20332010415 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894374758438 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671278824461 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132526608454 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586512063156 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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