The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below give information about the water usage sectors including industrial, domestic, and agriculture sectors in six different parts of the world.

According to the charts, the dominant water usage in South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia is in the agriculture sector. In contrast, Europe and North America have more focus on industrial consumption.
A more detailed look at charts, Europe has the highest percentage of industrial and lowest agricultural water consumption among others which are respectively about 53% and 15%. On the other hand, in central Asia, 88% of water used is in the agriculture sector and only 5% is dedicated to the industry which is the lowest amount compared to the other parts of the globe. North America with 48% stands on the second place in industrial water consumption. Domestic usage proportion in South America is about 19% however in other regions it is below 15%. South East Asia and central Asia both only spend 7% of the water for domestic purposes.

In summary, Europe, central Asia, and South America respectively have the greatest percentage of water use in industry, agriculture, and domestic area.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, so, in contrast, in summary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20418848168 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73544051227 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502617801047 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9878030638 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.444444444 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139175145099 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641532008572 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579081476828 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106803249994 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658794782315 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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