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TOPIC# 26 It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?
A sound and safe recreational facility is welcome everywhere, although it would cause some inevitable problems such as traffic jam and excessive noises. Regarding the fact that all movie theaters in our city are not in good conditions, I would appreciate having a new movie theater in our vicinity, since it would bring many goods such as prosperity, entertainment facilities, and job opportunities to the neighborhood.
First, it is obvious that a movie theater is a very suitable place for people to spend their spare time watching the latest movies with their friends, families, and their belove...
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Category: Excellent Excellent
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Average Word Length: 5.013 4.6
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