The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The given Pie Charts reveal the information about the use of water in percentage by the six area of the world the data is calibrated in per centum , which is simple and current representated.

Generally, it is evident that the maximum use of water for agriculture purpose by the Central Asia but on the other hand the least use of water for the industrial use in Central Asia from the six different areas.

In the beginning, the 48% use of water in North America for industrial use, while 39% for agriculture use. Whereas, the 13% for domestic use in North America. Moving forward, in South America 71% of water used for agriculture and 10% water has been used for industrial purpose. However, the 19% of water are used for domestic purpose. Furthermore, in Europe the water used for industrial, agriculture and for domestic purposes are
at 53%, 32%, and 15% respectively.

In addition to this, in Africa 84% of water for agriculture, while the 9% and 7% used for the domestic and industrial purposes. Moving ahead, in the Central Asia the 88% of agriculture purpose and the 7 % or 5% use of water for domestic and industrial purpose. Moreover, the use of water in south east asia for industrial, agriculture and domestic use at 12%, 81%, and 7% respectively.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79452054795 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83119102064 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447488584475 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6042014952 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42760993919 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217051853807 0.103423049105 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556059731562 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232535187557 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118995896064 0.0819641961636 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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