The diagram illustrates how water is used in different sectors among the areas of four continents of the world.
First of all, it is clear that the consumption of water for agriculture is the majority in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, while water use for industrial purposes is the lowest part, except for South America. On the contrary, North America and Europe mainly focuse on industry.
South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia utilise water for residental and industrial purposes relatively the same, but in South America domestic use is a little bit higher than industrial use than the others. Moreover, the fuction of water in North America and Europe is totally different from the others , industrial use in North America and Europe is five times and a half as much as the remaining areas, two times for household consumption.
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- The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 78
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade - labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant. 84
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 170, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... but in South America domestic use is a little bit higher than industrial use than the oth...
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Line 6, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thers. Moreover, the fuction of water in North America and Europe is totally diff...
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Line 6, column 321, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ope is totally different from the others , industrial use in North America and Eur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, while, except for, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04794520548 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5602463554 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4386257674 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.4 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6 5.23603664747 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169026030771 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104917280698 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484681795485 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141938845517 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320161481612 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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