It may argue that differentiating right from wrong is compulsory for growing kids and punishment is a necessity to help. I agree with this statement to some extent.
First of all, children at an early age are such a blank paper, they can not distinguish who is the devil and who is the angel. Children merely respond to other interaction, such as adults, animals or toys, like the way the receive whether it is good or bad. For instance, if a child has been tortured by a drunk dad without interfernce from his mom, he will definitely become violent, especially to his children afterwards.
The process of briging up kids from an early age cannot lack punishment. However, some parents may acknowledge wrong like ''the more painful the kids get, the more they will obey, but when the parents do that, they themselves are wrong, how can the teach the right thing? Pain is just one little side of nessesity of pusnishment. Parents should make rewards like a candy or a pie for their children whenever the understand the right and punishment for wrong behaviors. If children don't learn from their mistake, reduce their entertainment. And most significantly, parents themselves must be the right.
After all, rasing a kid does not last for a day or a week, it takes years, even decades. Therefore, teach the kids as soon as they can learn and punishment is an important element.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s adults, animals or toys, like the way the receive whether it is good or bad. For instance...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hat, they themselves are wrong, how can the teach the right thing? Pain is just one littl...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...dy or a pie for their children whenever the understand the right and punishment for wrong beha...
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...shment for wrong behaviors. If children dont learn from their mistake, reduce their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, after all, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78242677824 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73583221846 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9747103223 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9230769231 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291433994037 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962325213933 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672365428052 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170266724756 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574414873107 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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