Voluntary works are meaningful and helpful for everyone so that it has got more and more popular. It may argue that donated public service plays a vital role at high schools. This essay will discuss what benefits it brings, and agreement with volunteering.
First of all, nowadays, students tend to be kinder and willing to improve the environment around them so whether or not volunteers at high schools will become an essential part. Compared to the past, when civilians had to fought for their right, freedom and worked all day long just to get rid of starving, they had not enough knowledge and time to think about volunteering. Thanks to that, modern students have learnt to appreciate and with the affect of education. In fact, almost all the secondary and above schools in VIetnam have held free community service organizations for over a decade. In short, in peace, not only pupils but also the adults now have consciousness to help the society around them, therefore it won't be compulsory but everyone will do.
Moreover, helping the ones in need or redecorate the facilities around us including students is helping ourselves. That is the way life processes.As an illustration, upgrading the neighborhood or town nearby such as gathering the garbage or cleaning the arterial drain refreshes the atmosphere which is indeed healthy. Plus, recently, there are several propagandas run by the authorities and schools that gather the citizens to gain their knowledge about politeness and discipline which is extremely useful for the developing areas.
In conclusion, there have been and will be an uncharged community service in every school strategies relying on the advantages it brings to everyone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... improve the environment around them so whether or not volunteers at high schools will become ...
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Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding society'?
Suggestion: the surrounding society
...e adults now have consciousness to help the society around them, therefore it wont be compulsory but ev...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding facilities'?
Suggestion: the surrounding facilities
... helping the ones in need or redecorate the facilities around us including students is helping ourselves...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...rselves. That is the way life processes.As an illustration, upgrading the neighbor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18772563177 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81321265449 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642599277978 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5636999776 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18291896363 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585941771729 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388736735261 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101823126631 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361125289475 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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