The charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a country before and after the general election The election was won by the Conservative Party and they formed a government with the Liberal Democrats Summarise the information by sele

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The charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a country before and after the general election. The election was won by the Conservative Party and they formed a government with the Liberal Democrats. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison wherever relevant.

Given is the chart displaying the popularity of different parties prior and after the elections. The decline in the popularity of the party that won the elections i.e. the Conservative Party is clear from the graph. Before the elections the party had a share of 41% in popularity pie chart which reduced to 35% after one year of the elections. The popularity of this party actually increased to 45% after six months of elections but there might be some of its policies which led to its decline in the later six months.

Liberal Democrats' popularity decreased by a proportionate margin after forming government with Conservatives going from 19% to 10% and ultimately to 8%. The Green Party remained consistently popular before as well as 6 months after the elections but it also saw a decline in its popularity after 1 year completion of the elections. The Labour Party became a bit less popular after 6 months of elections but regained it in a period of 1 year.

The Undecided is the only one whose popularity has risen in this period. By just a mere of 4% before elections it reached to 10% in next 6 months and then to 20% in this complete one year. The lack of ruling government's efficiency could be the reason behind this gain in popularity by Undecided.

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Average: 7.7 (6 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t regained it in a period of 1 year. The Undecided is the only one whose popular...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...s complete one year. The lack of ruling governments efficiency could be the reason behind t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.289256198347 0.268076937826 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.099173553719 0.116061578633 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0454545454545 0.0759168565197 60% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0413223140496 0.0366838410393 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0247933884298 0.0131127313244 189% => OK
Prepositions: 0.157024793388 0.155750635184 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0289256198347 0.0379272487307 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78805541242 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289256198347 0.0210936926555 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136363636364 0.0948980150116 144% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00826446280992 0.00437022459523 189% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0165289256198 0.00967000014798 171% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1262.0 1161.00487805 109% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.9 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68468468468 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292792792793 0.337110787985 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225225225225 0.247514529752 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171171171171 0.171178102325 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148648648649 0.112407865282 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78805541242 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490990990991 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.6799866337 49.3433353143 89% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1818181818 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3464336806 42.9750493124 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.727272727 135.714022679 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.689975730869 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 42.7043407043 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.875 2.94281807926 98% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546237801177 0.418131533498 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.200915218496 0.181151798455 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107849344566 0.0850326197045 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.657395397426 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119416499012 0.157042692854 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.312280368418 0.228904883108 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141917483323 0.108899403657 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.451989011557 0.367819155151 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106487245788 0.0812612215331 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.416558787185 0.316326947829 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940150905762 0.0921553760075 102% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70731707317 297% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 3.16585365854 316% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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