The internet is viewed as an excellent means of communication by many. However, there are some who would argue that it is actually destroying our communication skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
From its inception, the internet has made a vital contribution for growth of humans. It has undoubtedly made our lives easier but on the other hand our over dependence on internet is of concern. Communication sector is one which has been highly influenced by this technology.
The internet has made it possible for people living in different time zones of the world to communicate within seconds. It acts as a boon for everyone who works or lives away from their family and catalyses in reuniting long lost friends with the help of social networking websites. Moreover, due to the presence of veterans of all fields be it politics, science, business, entertainment and more ; the ability to communicate with them has come into existence. Who would have thought that general public would be able to directly communicate with the US President himself and can understand his point of view on various topics. In fact, internet has acted as a precursor for the emergence of globalization. Whilst all aforementioned factors display how communication has benefited from internet, one cannot deny the fact that it has reduced the verbal communication and true essence of communication to some extent. It is a common sight these days that people tend to display their love on social media but nobody bothers to communicate these feelings in person which has lead to superficial relationships instead of real and affectionate ones.
Having said that, I strongly believe that internet has definitely improved communication between people. As it is said each coin has two sides and to which side we choose to focus is up to us. To reduce the ill-effects of internet on communication absolutely depends on the individual. Amidst all this hype of internet making communication weaker there exist numerous people who are still able to communicate in an old fashioned way that is verbally. So, to not let this technology overpower our relationships depend on us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orks or lives away from their family and catalyses in reuniting long lost friends...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... existence. Who would have thought that general public would be able to directly communicate w...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248554913295 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.179190751445 0.155533422707 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0664739884393 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0433526011561 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0578034682081 0.0437548338989 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.132947976879 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0462427745665 0.0403226058552 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03144238897 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0404624277457 0.0326793684256 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0028901734104 0.00163938923432 176% => OK
Determiners: 0.0780346820809 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0115606936416 0.021408717616 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0260115606936 0.011925033212 218% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1953.0 1933.35771543 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08411214953 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355140186916 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271028037383 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208722741433 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14953271028 0.137316102897 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03144238897 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.037074148 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591900311526 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 66.3611542995 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4158768908 49.517814964 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.814263465372 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 48.5028037383 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.52577319588 1.69124875643 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289463654381 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0875416408084 0.102741220458 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0408159022679 0.0668466124924 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.497026191901 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0876746920091 0.148594505496 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120087452152 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048361304107 0.0742795772207 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377913281468 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.062309975188 0.0638462369009 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223097596461 0.228012699653 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195616024224 0.058150111329 34% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.