The internet is viewed as an excellent means of communication by many. However, there are some who would argue that it is actually destroying our communication skills.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days internet is prime platform of communication used by many people. Whereas, some ethnic groups deem that it is major factor which reduce dexterity of communication. Both these views will be examined before giving my opinion.
On the bright side of this argument, the internet is globally accepted for communication by many men and women. First of all, it is time saving option fot send messages because this contain information e-mail, which can take few seconds for send. Secondly, what makes internet so popular, is that mass communication in the form of messages, video and audio. For example, for those who would like to do conference they do video and audio conference and transfer the message.
Another most prominent point is that, the internet is an alternate for those who do not know different languages and want to communication for different purpose. This can be best illustrated by, one business man who know only mother language but want to travel overseas, he can use the google translate and do verbal communication in different countries. Hence, the internet is cardinal and fundamental part of communication for people who want to communication i n different languages.
On the other side of this argument is that, these days messages makes it own languages in the form of short form. Indeed this is really devastating for communication especially for writing. For instant, in the whatsApp people are using shortforms and that can not easily understand by people.
After elaborated all the points it can be concluded that despite thinking about cons of internet, people should be more focused on the usage of internet. I strongly think that internet is best for communication because it is needed in study, job and travel. In general internet is time and money saving option for communication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
...wn languages in the form of short form. Indeed this is really devastating for communic...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89921611435 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5090001847 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187639401932 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710443184675 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552135444351 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109530882677 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539547625938 0.056905535591 95% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.