In recent years through the internet air travel trad and popular culture globalisation has rapidly increased Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is agood thing Discuss this view and give your own opinio

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In recent years, through the internet, air travel, trad and popular culture, globalisation has rapidly increased. Many people believe that the increased interaction between nations through globalisation is agood thing.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Globalisation is shaping our world. Nations are moving closer and closer together both economically and culturally, and this opening up opportunities for rapid contact between people around the world. Recent developments in transportation and information technology mean that the world is fast becoming one big village, inhabited by people who are developing increasingly similar lifestyles. In cities across the world, the same food and shopping chains are dominating the high streets, the same films are showing in cinemas and the same music is download. Indeed, where in the world these days is it not possible to buy a can of the same soft drink? There is no doubt that globalisation has bought with it many benefits, which increasing opportunities to travel and the ability to share information to name but a few. It has therefore increased the choice for many people in both work and life as a whole. However, it is important to remember that there are negative aspects too. Globalisation has environmental implementations such as air travel and pressures on eco-system. In addition, because physical borders and boundaries are disappearing, globalisation risks depriving nations of what makes each one unique. For example, local customs and languages are slowly disappearing and small local businesses are being replaced by large multinational companies. In conclusion, I think that globalisation has the potential to create wealth and improve living standards but it has to be handled in a sustainable way. In my view, multinational companies have a responsibility to make sure this happens by focussing less on profit and doing to support local businesses and communities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 548, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'downloaded'.
Suggestion: downloaded
...howing in cinemas and the same music is download. Indeed, where in the world these days ...
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Line 1, column 1494, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sustainable way" with adverb for "sustainable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ving standards but it has to be handled in a sustainable way. In my view, multinational companies ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37121212121 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2494878455 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7394825828 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185627112454 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603628362289 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474384884331 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185627112454 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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