Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this hustler-bluster life style people are drinking too much coffee and tea. Its contain drastic amount of sugar, which is not good for once health. Few people believe that it is regime role to curb sugar consumption, while others articulate that it is self responsibility. I think that self consciousness plays wider role first rather than government responsibility for sugar control. Both these views will be examined before reaching to a concrete decision.
Inadvertently people are consuming myriad of sugar in their body in a form of liquid and powder, which will create detrimental consequences in a body. Like obesity, heart problem and much more. The government should come ahead and take this is a solemn problem because it will directly affects on overall development of a country. For example, in the U.S.A majority of people; especially teenagers are eating fast food with soft drinks, which contain lots of sugar and they are becoming fat. Furthermore, they are leasy as compare to normal person anc deliberately it will hinder the nations development. Thus, we can say that it is government responsibility to control sugar consumption in once life.
Self awareness related to health is rudimentary point. If we are not takecare about our selves then no one else. Moreover , high sugar level will lead chances of diabetes and heart attack, which is detrimental for life and cost the earth in once life for a treatment. For that it is our responsibility to became health conscious. To illustrate, in India people are doing yoga and following strict diate plane in their daily life because in India majority of people are suffering from diabetes, which is leading factor for younger people that they should limit suger consumption.
To synopsis, it is self and government both responsibility to curb sugar amount, but I deem that self role is vital than government. In pragmatic world it is next to imposible for the government to limit sugar consumption in once life. Hence, we are one and only, who responsible for our life and we should try to reduce sugar in our life so it will not creat bittersweet situation and we will enjoy our rainbow life recklessly.
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- Eating too much sugar is harmful for health Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat Discuss both views and g 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02203856749 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8797643669 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.254078954 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9473684211 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350668473684 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106314818458 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672864684776 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223795915483 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564329837817 0.056905535591 99% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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