Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views

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Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this hustler-bluster life style people are drinking too much coffee and tea. Its contain drastic amount of sugar, which is not good for once health. Few people believe that it is regime role to curb sugar consumption, while others articulate that it is self responsibility. I think that self consciousness plays wider role first rather than government responsibility for sugar control. Both these views will be examined before reaching to a concrete decision.
Inadvertently people are consuming myriad of sugar in their body in a form of liquid and powder, which will create detrimental consequences in a body. Like obesity, heart problem and much more. The government should come ahead and take this is a solemn problem because it will directly affects on overall development of a country. For example, in the U.S.A majority of people; especially teenagers are eating fast food with soft drinks, which contain lots of sugar and they are becoming fat. Furthermore, they are leasy as compare to normal person anc deliberately it will hinder the nations development. Thus, we can say that it is government responsibility to control sugar consumption in once life.
Self awareness related to health is rudimentary point. If we are not takecare about our selves then no one else. Moreover , high sugar level will lead chances of diabetes and heart attack, which is detrimental for life and cost the earth in once life for a treatment. For that it is our responsibility to became health conscious. To illustrate, in India people are doing yoga and following strict diate plane in their daily life because in India majority of people are suffering from diabetes, which is leading factor for younger people that they should limit suger consumption.

To synopsis, it is self and government both responsibility to curb sugar amount, but I deem that self role is vital than government. In pragmatic world it is next to imposible for the government to limit sugar consumption in once life. Hence, we are one and only, who responsible for our life and we should try to reduce sugar in our life so it will not creat bittersweet situation and we will enjoy our rainbow life recklessly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 965.302439024 188% => OK
No of words: 363.0 196.424390244 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01101928375 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8797643669 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 106.607317073 183% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 283.868780488 203% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.254078954 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7368421053 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350668473684 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106314818458 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672864684776 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223795915483 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564329837817 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 40.7170731707 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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