Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.What is your opinion?

Essay topics:

Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What is your opinion?

Few people believe that prime measurement of intelligence is the success, where other articulates that intelligence can be measured by academic score cards and academic ranks in the schools. In my perception it does not necessary that ones, who is successful is intelligent. Before reaching to conclusion this essay will present arguments, which supports my opinion.

Intelligence is an individual talent, which is god gifted. This dexterity can be measured by ones academic result and knowledge.Furthermore, schools might be measures intelligence of the students by organising an events such as, quiz competition and general knowledge. For example, in India majority of schools are organising science fares. In that what measures the intelligence of the students, is their projects and explanations of their ideas. Hence, it can be said that it is the pragmatic approach for measurement of intelligence level.

Another most prominent point is that, it is not mandatory, who is successful is intelligent because success could be anything, it would be economical and social. Moreover, many people who are intelligent but not getting success in life due to hinderance of surrounding environment.Althought in the Africa many people have intelligence, they have been suffering economically and socially. Thus, above example tells that surroundings environment might proscribe the success no matter how a person is intelligent.

All the points elaborated above it can be concluded that intelligence is measured by academics and knowledge.
I strongly think that though intelligent person not getting success because of circumstances, for that success is not a stunning measurement of intelligence.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: surroundings'; surrounding's
...ocially. Thus, above example tells that surroundings environment might proscribe the success...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67843137255 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50453981401 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1188900325 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402385436553 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132146618376 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097330830527 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222408239656 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057509047693 0.056905535591 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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