The charts below show the proportions of the world’s oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the proportions of the world’s oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.

The bar charts provide information about the percentage of total world oil resources kept in different areas and their percentages of annual oil consumption.

Overall, it can be seen that areas which keep the least amount of oil have the biggest percentages of oil consumed in a year.

It is obvious from the data that significant amount of oil resources are held in middle east with more than half of total world’s oil resources. This figure for Canada and Central and South America are 14.84% and 8.12% respectively, whereas the percentage for Eastern Europe and Africa are around 6.4%. Other areas’ amount of held oil resources are just under 3%.

By contrast to the amount of stored oil, the majority of total world annual oil consumption comes to Asia (26.21%) and the United States (25.48%). The figure for Western Europe is 19.24%, which places this area into the third place. Meanwhile, Middle East, Central and South America, and Eastern Europe consume between 6% and 7% of oil resources, and other areas’ percentages do not exceed 4%.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Europe) must be used with a third-person verb: 'consumes'.
Suggestion: consumes
...l and South America, and Eastern Europe consume between 6% and 7% of oil resources, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0625 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59692657468 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3872705372 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210055428597 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104880031738 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743037103906 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141446595647 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462499892632 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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