The bar chart enumerates the reasons why US residents traveled and the pie chart gives information about the main problems they encountered in the year 2009. At the first glance, it is conspicuous that commuting to and from work was the primary reason why Americans traveled in 2009 whereas the cost of traveling was the major issue Americans were most concerned about in the same year.
The bar chart, if closely examined, shows that the purpose of commuting made up nearly a half of all trips made by Americans in 2009. It was followed by unspecific “personal reasons” and shopping, accounting for 19% and 16% respectively. By contrast, trips for social or recreation reasons and visiting friends or relatives constituted an insignificant proportion of all travel, accounting for 16% combined. Only one in ten people made a journey for the former reason while trips for visiting friends or relatives accounted for the remaining 6%.
Looking more closely at the pie chart, we can see that the travel budget was of paramount importance to 36% of American travelers. Almost one in five people regarded safety as their foremost travel concern, whereas aggressive drivers and highway congestion were cited as another two major problems for 17% and 14 % of the US travelers. Finally, only a small proportion of those surveyed thought that access to public transport or space for pedestrians were the most important travel issues, at around 8% and 6% respectively.
- All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of vacations in a year To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe the government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- In recent years more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage 89
- Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternative ways to decrease crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 92
- Nowadays in many countries woman have full time jobs therefore it is logical to share household task evenly between man and woman To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10416666667 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8349755093 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0918113488 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.111111111 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293279380108 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122862039701 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589243975819 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19225011076 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441984927551 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.