The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

The pie charts compare the percentage of some different factors that make both of age group under and over 30 years old feel satisfied.
It is clear that the achievement at work and doing hobbies are the highest factors for the happiness of people of different age groups. Additionally, there are some various factors that make each age group happy.
For people aged under 30 years old, the proportion of the achievement at work is highest, at 32%, whereas the figure for the younger age group is slightly lower, at 31%. Meanwhile, doing hobbies is the second highest factors for both age groups, at 24% and 22% for the younger and older people respectively.
On the other hand, having a good appearance that affects the happiness of people aged under 30 years old makes up 18%, while 20% older people choosing financial security as an important factor to their joyfulness. The other interesting factors are traveling and being with family that account for 15% for the younger age group and 14% for the older people. The figure for other factors for both of age group over and under 30 years old is lowest, at only 10% and 14% respectively.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74874371859 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47016489392 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472361809045 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4099917605 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.125 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173671843816 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107709809222 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518434896328 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144714446617 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473842978203 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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