The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

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The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

The depicted pie chart enumerates the outcomes of a survey concerning what makes people happy, it is split by two age group.

Overall, it clearly indicates that the majority of people of the various aged group have experienced happiness after achieving at work whereas, other factors are undoubtedly the least prefer reason for happiness.

To initiate, people under 30 seems to be happy after achieving at work at 31 percent, which makes up the highest trend. Similarly, nearly a quarter ratio of masses has felt happiness by doing their desire hobbies. However, around 18 percent, 15 percent as well as 14 percent are supposed to be happy by having a good appearance, traveling and other factors, simultaneously.

On the contrary, the roughly one-third ratio of people over 30 had faced happiness via achievement at work. In addition, nearly a quarter proportion and 20 percent of masses are supposed to have experienced happiness by doing their respective hobbies and financial securities, respectively. Furthermore, despite traveling, around 14 percent of people tend to be happy by being with their family. Surprisingly, other factors are the least preferable reasons for acquiring happiness which is about 10 percent.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, similarly, so, third, well, whereas, in addition, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38144329897 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93207910783 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2596715764 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129361378411 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662375276356 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10418521198 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12740239279 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13054989705 0.0819641961636 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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