The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy

Essay topics:

The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

The two pie charts give an overview of different categories that two age groups, factors that makes them happy.

Overall, it is noticeable that young and older groups, achievement at work got a huge portion that contributed in obtaining happiness. However, doing their hobbies is the second factor that makes both age groups happy too.

Looking at the information in more detail, firstly, achievement at work made up the largest percentage in young and older age, accounted 31% and 32% respectively. Followed by, doing their hobbies who got the second biggest part, 22% for under 30 years old and an increase to 2% in 30 years and above. Furthermore, these only two categories are common in both age groups.

On the other hand, around 18% of younger age wants to have a good appearance that made up the third factor, while to have a financial security around 20% for older people makes them happy too. However, travelling for younger generation is the least important which comprised 15%. In contrast, people getting older want to spend their time being with family accounted 14% percentage. There are other factors that made up the both age groups makes them happy, which made up the smallest part in the chart.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, third, while, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94174757282 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50699840505 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577669902913 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6146037462 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18417039623 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751242914064 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072700370375 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121493602668 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056450308808 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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