Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
Adolescence is encouraging by the government to experience to get into a part-time work. However, according to my perspective merits are more than demerits about exposing them to work as early age.
To begin with my positive side, some countries are starting to pursue that teenagers at their young age can have a part-time job that can help them to develop their skills and vast knowledge. Most of the available jobs offer to them is during summer break or after their school hours. By means of this, education still be their priority and cannot be suffer. Furthermore, this a good start to become independent to their family, but still with guidance and to build up their confidence and critical thinking. Additionally, teenagers know the value of hard-earned money and to spend it wisely.
There are obvious minor disadvantages that teenagers are facing dealing with it, as well as the parents. Usually parents want to focus their children in their education first, and later on to work on their desired profession after completing university. Some of them believe that teenagers have a difficulty doing together as working and at the same time studying. They think that if their child already earning money they will forget to study harder. Moreover, due to financial crisis teenagers going to work that against their will, at least to help their family for daily expenses and needs.
In my view, teenagers engaging to work in a lighter job aside from studying can help them to develop their skills, to know the value of hard work and money. But still, school should be their first priority and never be for granted. Parents should always be there to guide them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, at least, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94326241135 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54827146126 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0438343669 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119732941306 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451111532337 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550397372771 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767471513501 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249125100136 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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