It is said that the fast pace of our everyday life, as a result of the rapid development of the telecommunication technology and travel industry, has negative effects on the individual, nations and globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, technology has a biggest contribution in economic globally. Due to rapid modernization and innovation of fast growing telecommunication and travel industry, it leads a major impact on people’s daily living. Some people argued that it has negative effect to everyone and worldwide. However, according to my perspective, merits are more than demerits, by means of accessible ways of communication and improvement of tourism.
In the past, communicating to other people was a challenged, especially to loved ones who are living faraway. Sending letter’s thru postal and telephone were the mode of conveying message. And the years passed by, because of high advance technology, telecommunication become accessible and efficient to everyone. The rampant spread of mobile, high-speed internet, email and social media leads to communication very convenient. my mother has a younger sister working abroad, with the help of video chat apps, they are able to chat every day. This is why I disagree that face pace life has a negative effect.
Travelling locally and around the globe was not the priority by most of the people, because of high expenses and safety. Through the fast growing development of tourism, travel agency offers affordable package vacation locally and oversees. Airline and Land Transportation Company offers cheap prices. Therefore, people can avail and have a priviledge to explore the beauty and culture of the world has to offer. Our family see to it that we can travel even once a year, ahead of time I will save money, book a ticket and hotel. Thus, we can enjoy our vacation and create memories.
In conclusion, fast pace happening in everyday life leads to advance technology. People must be flexible and embrace in everyday changes and development. On the other hand, people should not forget the simple way of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27609427609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98894333622 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3267441146 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4736842105 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190942236059 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526648331926 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616909846559 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105279519569 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204138131511 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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