Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
It is believe that people not doing well in school, still have a victorious life and can achieve their dreams. In my thought,finishing education has a strong foundation to prosper and to attain people's goal, hence, skills, talent, abilities and personality traits matters too.
Firstly, even though some people has lack of interest to attend school, not doing well in academic, resulted to failing in subject, still they become successful in their chosen path. Characteristic of the person helps in attaining their goal, particularly, a powerful determination, perseverance, hardworking and positive outlook in life.
Secondly, persons talent and abilities also helps too, one clear example,if the person has a skills in cooking, through her experience and talent they can build up a restaurant business and by this they can helps them to strive hard and become successful. Another example is, having a talent in singing, through proper training they can use this to join in a competition, to earn extra income, build up confidence and gain experience, luckily, to have a recording contract, becoming a famous singer and doing concert as well.
Being successful in life, the most advantages if the people finished in school, chose a profession that can build up their career and personal growth. Most people believe that success is not mainly for reaching a career goal, instead it comes in a deeper aspect of life, such as, being contented and satisfied what life has to offer, a happy and stress free life, physically, emotionally and spiritually healthy.
In conclusion, people who not able to finish in school still become productive and can still succeed in life, by improving their talent, abilities and having good attitude to achieve goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24822695035 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86109346968 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9474465746 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.444444444 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261144441325 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124104770087 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892896320528 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156794331491 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964645795424 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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