Some people believe that graduates in university can be a successful in career, while some people believe better to look for a job after school.
Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
It is argued by some that graduating in a university is the key to get a successful career, on the one hand,
many people thought that it is best to apply a job after finishing school. Having a degree in a chosen course will help to get a prominent and stable work,getting a job after school will makes the people not prepare lack of experience and skills.
Most of the people's ambition is to graduate in university with the profession they chose and to have enough knowledge and skills before applying to that position.I believe that students should complete staying in university before searching for a job, particularly for the courses that requires professional skills. On clear example is, studying in nursing school will educate and provide nursing skills to their students in delivering quality care for the patient. Having a good education will give the people sense of confident when they will start a career.However,some student not able to finish school because of some issues like financial problem.
On the other hand, some people looking for a job after school and not thinking to continue in college. Most reasons parents cannot send children to school because of financial issues and children dont have interest to pursue it. People most of think is to earn money as early to provide for daily living. Consequently,people can only find limited work, because most company preferred a degree holder, as a result they can only earn minimal wage.
I my conclusion, finishing in university with a degree has more advantages and have a successful career and future ahead,instead of people who chose not to continue in college and look for a job directly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, look, so, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98928571429 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86961340993 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1823551318 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.7 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348649997054 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145555464626 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945451964082 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194217969155 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186387836629 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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