It is seen that older adults are not given enough respect and facilities in many countries. What could be the reason for this? What are effects of this?
Nowadays, advance communication technology has a vital impact in everyday lives. By means of accessible connection to other people and information, i strongly believe that it really helps a lot.
Owing to the rampant improvement of Digital communication, one clear example is an email, one evident benefit is sending and receiving important messages anywhere and anytime, moreover, it has allotted storage for personalise files and pictures. Thru exchanging messages good relation to others builds up.
On the other hand, almost half of the world’s population using social media by the help of latest technology, mostly people are having their own accounts. Through this various application, long-time friends and relatives reconnected and people who are not able to see personally. You can also post variety of photos, videos and memorable event happening in your life. Additionally, it’s a one way to acquainted new friends. Furthermore, everyone can play interactive and educational games downloaded in the site. Aside from this, people become aware to the latest news and information happening in the environment.
However, there’s a drawback in excessive exposure to social media, Obviously, most people spending more time in their mobile than studying and personal relationship to the world. personal communication are lacking within the family. Because of public exposure, personal life becomes affected.
In conclusion, due to high technology in communication, people became attached to social media and other sites that people can be reconnected with friends and family. people should be intelligent and vigilant in the limitation when browsing and posting in any social media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ing and posting in any social media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69140625 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01529861819 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66796875 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9662366251 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0445369873247 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0138981339149 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228262250728 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0203751677032 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194952575448 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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