Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teacher, whereas other argues that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Education has a big impact on the development of a child’s learning. Nowadays, some people think that teacher should not give assignment or task to their students, while others agree to give homework that will help them to gain more and it will be beneficial for children’s education. I do believe that, its better not to give task after school hours, children should balance study and recreation.
Providing good education is the best foundation of child’s development; its a golden treasure that nobody can get it from him/her. Student strives hard to have a better knowledge and skills. Furthermore, it will help them to choose a profession after graduating in secondary school. However, some people not agree that teachers should give homework after school hours. In my thoughts, children should be allow other things to explore and spend more time in dealing other physical activities specially engaging in outdoor sports and playing with friends. Hence, by giving extra homework by teacher, it gives additional dilemma to students by managing their time and doing some chores, such as, for weekends they can help in household chores and to have quality time with family by going to church and mall.
For instance, some people believe that its better to give homework after school hours, for the continuity of learning and students motivation. Some students still enjoying doing homework at home for enhancing their knowledge and do better at school.
To sum up, education is vital in every individual, its a matter of balancing between studying and do other recreational activities that build a meaningful life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...best foundation of child’s development; its a golden treasure that nobody can get i...
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Message: Did you mean 'allowed'?
Suggestion: allowed
...urs. In my thoughts, children should be allow other things to explore and spend more ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...education is vital in every individual, its a matter of balancing between studying ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, still, while, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22433460076 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67786986294 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0532767586 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308271053441 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114149828518 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888771025027 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186289700683 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940849251366 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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