Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teacher, whereas other argues that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Providing quality education is the foundation of children’s development. It is a golden treasure that nobody can take it away from his/her. A child through education learns basic rules, regulations, norms and values in society. Recently, it becomes an issue in the society whether the teacher should give homework in their students. In my thought, giving teachers an assignment can enhance the continuity of learning and motivation for the student. Consequently, it will lead them less time for recreations and family time.
Some people think that teacher should give extra work at home like homework and school project. During class hours, teachers teach their respective lesson for that day, however, time is not enough to tackle the entire lesson, hence, teacher will give take home task. Some students opt to do it willingly and enjoyable. It will help them to gain more knowledge and skills, also to improve their grades and school performance. Additionally, it will lead to a continue process of learning and will motivate them to study well. My niece after school hours, at home she will do assignment right after her meal. She makes sure to do it before doing other activities like watching tv and playing with friends.
On the other hand, other people believe that giving homework is not useful for the children. Education should only be taught in school. Giving extra workload task to students has a negative impact on their development. Child encourages to have a balance life between study and engaging in recreational activities especially in outdoor sports like basketball and swimming to develop their social skills and communication. Not giving assignment to school children also can have more quality time for family and friends. This is also a way to familiarize in household chores to improve their skills and responsibility at home. During weekends, my niece if she doesn’t have assignment, she’s helping her mother to do household chores such as cleaning and washing the dishes. Aside from this, she spends her free time going to church with family and playing with friends.
In conclusion, education has a major role in children’s future. It helps them to expand the vision and creates awareness. Giving assignment to school children has a good and bad benefit for the students. Teacher should be sensitive in balancing in learning and recreation for their students.
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Suggestion:
...g and recreation for their students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20565552699 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.728854436 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506426735219 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6909555936 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.56 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267118880752 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837901842925 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847320090748 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178233960277 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258659860804 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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