Some people say that people remember special gifts or present that they receive. Why do you think that is? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It’s better to give than to receive, as the famous saying says. Giving gifts or items to anyone has a big impact to the person who will receive it. A price doesn’t matter as long as it comes from the heart and share it unconditionally. In my perspective, people remembered the special presents that they received because they felt appreciated and loved, and the sender feelings towards the receiver.
Now a days, because of economic crisis happening in our society, people experiencing hard time to save money to buy gifts for their love ones, especially in celebrating special occasion. Aside from preparing meal, giving presents is important too but not obliged. People make ways to collect and save money to purchase cheaper and valuable gift. Receiver are grateful, they felt appreciated and loved. My uncle’s daughter, celebrated her 7th birthday a month ago. He doesn’t have permanent job that time, but still he found ways to got money, he sold harvested root crops and bought tiny bicycle as a gift for his daughter. This is the one reason that child felt the importance and loved by their parents.
On the other hand, sending precious things as a gift to others is a secondary reason why they are not able to forget the sender. The sender itself is hard to forget because spending time, money and effort to choose the perfect present for love ones is irresistible. That’s why some people say, their love ones presence is enough. During Valentine’s day, people celebrate by giving flower and chocolates as a sign of their love and caring. Some are giving personal cards to express their feelings.
In conclusion, we can give and share gifts anytime and anywhere, conveying loved and importance to others matters. It’s the thought the count.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, still, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96632996633 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60171555055 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.976918996 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9444444444 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230432243188 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694889059055 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676270727666 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134500050775 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668724918878 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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