More and more people are relying on the private car at their major meant of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Most people are using private vehicles as a major mode of transportation. I believe because of this situation it can cause traffic congestion and affect the health of the people. I think the possible solution of this is to limit selling cars and road widening.
By using owned cars when they are going to work or anywhere else, one evident benefit to people, it provides comfort and safety. By this, car companies selling cars thinking business strategies that can attract the client, such as giving low offer and installment basis of payment that client can afford to purchase it. Firstly, as a result of rising private vehicle specifically in the main road, it cause build up traffic congestion and slow moving vehicle, therefore, people will be the one to suffer by staying longer time inside the car instead of spending their time in a productive way. Secondly, another effect of over-reliance in riding an owned car, people get to use them even going to nearby places, instead of walking or using bicycle. Doing simple exercise is essential to people’s health.
Larger volume of private cars in the main road is alarming, in my view, the feasible way to limit or stop this rising cars is the government should control the car companies by selling cheaper cars by using their promotion, implementing the policy if they don't have a parking they are not qualified to buy it. Another beneficial solution is to build or road widening to reduce congestion.
In conclusion, using private car has good benefits for the driver or owner. Traffic jam and health will be the major problem, by limiting of selling cars and road widening can help to lessen it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91872791519 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61901109557 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.5504084437 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240512737298 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090743966844 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456788376623 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159490586003 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203776901603 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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