Here and more people are relying on the private car at their major meant of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Admittedly, air pollution has turned into one of the most concerning of human in current century and undoubtedly, role of private cars is highly likely as same as other pollutants such as factories. Thus, I intend to write more about the side effects of not using the public transports will be provided as well as few solutions in order decrease the impact of this problem as follows.
In spite of advise of conservationists on this issue we still witness citizens in crowded cities pay no attention and prefer to use their own vehicles. Traffic jams is the another consequence of this challenge in addition to smoke and dust, as a results people have to spend more horse behind the cross roads which leads to delay in daily affairs. Moreover, while the huge number of differing vehicles would be applied in transportation system, suddenly the urban facilities would be locked particularly in rush hours and disturbing horns make disrupts for patients and other vulnerable groups. Jakarta-Capital of Indonesia_ is fully a sensible example which illustrates story properly, not surprisingly, this metropolis has dedicated the most difficulties.
This is the point where subway and bus can come in handy, as they can carry a vast number of passengers in less time. Additionally, carpooling is an alternative when employees decide to share their own cars with their co-workers. Also, it seems penalty could be a method to punish the drivers use more than twice in a week by making a rules in some organizations such as municipalities.
By way of conclusion, it is absolutely not irrefutable fact if humans determine to abdicate their prejudice and think widely is it not destroying the other guys civil rights.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...is has dedicated the most difficulties. This is the point where subway and bus c...
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Suggestion: a rule; rules
...use more than twice in a week by making a rules in some organizations such as municipal...
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...dely is it not destroying the other guys civil rights.
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...estroying the other guys civil rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05300353357 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01985587792 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664310954064 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.874001637 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116478272029 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407089979393 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312533401373 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651869750721 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398406390559 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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