Development in technology have brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler to solve the environment problems. Others, however, believe technology is way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion
These days it appears that technology has the crucial role to play in our lives and like anything entails merits and drawbacks. While, there are broadly valid arguments to the contrary, I firmly believe that the advantages of using differing gadgets and the Internet far outweigh demerits. Thus, I wish to estimate both point of views in associated with this trend as follows.
Firstly, I think we should not base our opinions on widely generalizations that if I am uneasy with these modern devices therefore, anyone has the same feelings and vice versa. Typically, technophobes constantly argue that technology has brought various difficulties in some extends for humans, as a result they find it troublesome for example the driving crashes. By extension of cell phones especially smart phones the rate of road accidents and death has dramatically increased which it is an evidence of being high-risky of these man-made products. Hence, above-mentioned group prefer to evade applying electrical equipment because they have stuck to this idea life regardless of complexity would be more enjoyable.
On the other hand, majority of people are likely to be taken advantage of these facilities rather than escaping of it. The justifications behind of their view is that saving-labor devices have made more comfortable than ever before and it is provided just by pushing a few buttons do wash a huge load of clothes as well as dishes. Saving the time and money is the other profit of quick transportation that you can find yourself in the opposite part of the world.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that even though it bring some disrupting cases for particular sections of the community once in a blue moon, but they have came in handy in so many prospects. Finally, I would contend that whether we should employ the technology or not is a contentious one and it depends on your lifestyles and other factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...eaffirm my position that even though it bring some disrupting cases for particular se...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...nity once in a blue moon, but they have came in handy in so many prospects. Finally,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02173913043 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8692643896 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.2434744471 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137650983299 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425541018044 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277297544331 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746678869903 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245026742017 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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