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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Undoubtedly, a vast amount of waste would be daily produced in the home sections. The effective measurements have been carried out by governments and different levels of society in term of recycling. however, some people strongly believe that it demands further consideration as legislation can play a crucial role in this issue. this essay will discuss about this controversial matter as follows.

Firstly, when the majority of people in developed countries have basically resolved this problem, still some individuals do not respect to this valuable process. one particularly good example is Sweden as one of the pioneer nations in recycling of various materials. Even though, there is no any obligation in performing this program, but people have learnt how to deal with waste in their home to help the mother nature to be more intact.

Secondly, some experts have stuck to this idea which only way to increase dramatically the rate of recycling is making strict legal requirement. Mainly, this trend would be more tangible in developing countries especially in the East West region which people do not behave correctly to trash and leftovers recycling. Temporarily, some plans have been performed in Asian land like Iran which encouraged housewives to separate wet and dry trash in recycle been, however these plans have not been fully successful.

To sum it up, making rule about this challenge can be considered as an alternative along with other solutions. The authorities should confront this matter based on their people`s cultures to observe the best result.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37848605578 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85378572267 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649402390438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.322915213 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203810713461 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072246512523 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583801897641 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117995894005 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427244303699 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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