Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In these day a vast number of museums are established in all parts of the world with historical and scientific perspectives. There are differing views about whether these appealing places should have educational purposes or not. I suppose that these exhibitions should be applied in both targets. In this essay I aim to investigate more on this issue as follows.
First of all, I personally believe that museums are spontaneously entertainment as annually absorb a considerable flood of fans especially those are interested in art and all things related to it. One particularly salient example of this matter is Louvre in Paris where not only is a structure for tourists but also it is absolutely gorgeous for ones who find fascinating place for leisure time. As a result, I am convinced one of the most principle goals of establishing the cultural building is making people vibrant and happy.
Equally importantly, I would contend that other aspect of the museums is associated with learning. While a majority number of professors consider them as an appropriate source for improving the knowledge of their students. Moreover, various aces of the history is incredibly are sensible as long as the visitors go to these facilities like Jurassic park which illustrates the procedure of events happened for animals has died out over 60 million years ago.
Consequently, I state my own opinion that museums can function properly in both mentioned operations, thus I firmly argue that two above groups assume well and it has said everybody has divers idea and we must respect to humans point of view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, i suppose, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1102661597 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93409515832 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692015209125 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3577488914 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201418650197 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651978708004 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502978676986 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103601444032 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360818162141 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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