Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Education of millions students in different parts of the world, raises this question whether they should study their desirable major at university or they must follow the society requirements to guarantee their career in the future. In my opinion, people have different ideas about this matter and it strongly depends on their approaches and preferences. Altogether, I personally believe that the first one is more logical and priority of vocations may be altered in the future. In this essay, I aim to evaluate two sides of this issue as follows.
Firstly, I address the first opinion which suggests that students should pay attention more to what they are interested in, rather than their career life because if they are reluctant to educate in unfavorable field, definitely, they are not successful in getting a proper job. Usually, it is observed that the number of students decide to abandon academic environment and after a while, they return to university to start new major.
In contrast, some individuals think ones who intend to open a new chapter academically, they have to broaden their horizons and opt the proper field based on future income and job opportunities. In other words, when there is no capacity in absorbing your subsequent major, it is highly reasonable to change this trend, nonetheless, the regret is the only thing that future presents to you.
In conclusion, this matter can be influenced by different parameters and students have multiple choices in selection of academic field. I reaffirm that the interest is the most factor in this way and may your profession have an excellent reputation in country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, nonetheless, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13805970149 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79969875142 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9190122117 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.7 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199171148498 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693370114905 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563131197518 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10882962568 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511930974108 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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