Children today play video games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world.
What are your opinions on this?
The diagram below indicating the main process of cement production that has four steps in the factory as well as how it can be used as one of the principle materials in concrete preparation for different applications in construction of the buildings and other civil infrastructures.
Overall, in the first stage limestone and clay crushed together by a robust crusher to form a powder. Afterward, this prepared powder passes through a path where a mixer consistently blends them. This stage is before third stage which the blended powder treated by an indirect heat at the end of the rotating heater pipe. Finally, to obtain a smooth product, a grinder with strong teeth is used . This is exactly the point the cement is ready to be packed into special bags for distributing in the market.
The second part of the diagram shows that how cement as a key substance applied in concrete preparation. Generally, this process is not complicated and it is just the combination of various materials to be fully uniform. While water (10%), cement (15%), sand (20 %), and gravel which is small stones (50%) poured into a mixer with a steady speed, the final product called concrete would be prepared to be sent to constructive sites.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... other civil infrastructures. Overall, in the first stage limestone and clay cr...
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... a smooth product, a grinder with strong teeth is used . This is exactly the poi...
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...ct, a grinder with strong teeth is used . This is exactly the point the cement i...
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...ong teeth is used . This is exactly the point the cement is ready to be packed i...
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... preparation. Generally, this process is not complicated and it is just the combi...
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...pared to be sent to constructive sites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, third, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89855072464 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78267409306 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1646559103 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115217689121 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485307344505 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446652383833 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731751606107 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252803932803 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.