The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By
2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged
65 and over.
What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What
can be done now to deal with this situation?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
While some worry about the population and living in overcrowded cities there are several developing countries will face with serious problem as it is estimated by 2030 most individuals will be aged 65 years and over. Probably, the effect of this trend is detrimental if they do not resolve this difficulty. Indeed, what measurements can change this matter. This essay is going to discuss about this ahead challenge as follows.
Undoubtedly, this brings difficulties particularly for young generation. When the rate of older tends to increase in the future, thus the potential labor decreased. In other words, the incomes of the governments remarkably diminished through the tax and they will have to allocate huge amount of money for caring of the old guys. retirement to over 70 years to obtain their revenues. This puts into younger under severe pressure to work for long hours in order to compensate the lack of the workers. It even may forces the officials to raise the age of
Besides, the life style and culture are going to be influenced by this matter. For example, the numerous goods produced for youth in the market by the companies will be replaced by other products designed for old people. Moreover, the government should establish more facilities and equipment to meet the requirements of this level of society.
In conclusion, it is absolutely essential to resolve this problem. Some policies like accepting more immigrants from other countries and encouraging the family to bring more child can be practical in the future to ascend the rate of fertility. If the employees properly gain excellent wage, therefore, they trend to expand the number of family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14130434783 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75930715805 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9297347105 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176929650247 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490174425732 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890548809728 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989411099185 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760174881098 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.