This essay claims that, the index of birth in many developed and economically strong nations is likely to initiate to drop over the next 50 years. Furthermore, there is another submission that, by 2030 it is evaluated that more than one third of the population in many raised and financially rigid countries is likely to be aged 65 and over.
In this essay, we will discuss all views and yield causes for my answersand comprise any related instances from my skills or experience.
In the first place, it will not cause to the serious problems and it is more likely to solve this problems veey easy. If this predictions true now we should start to replace old constructions and structures to the modern, this will help to elder people to live in a comfortable house and enjoy living. On the other hand, if our young child increase in the future, this will cause to the several problems such as lack of employees, lack of production and food. Also, technological inventions are likely to decrease year by year due to the lack of young and fresh scientists. In addition to this, it will cause to decrease the economy of developed countries and will lead to finacial crisis due to the increased pensioners and declined employees.
In conclusion, i can say that if this estimation is true, it will damage the economy of big nations but only this countries but also the poor nations. Now if we can, we should establish the strategy to how can we decrease the world population to prevent over the next 50 years problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, third, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69288389513 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65232540574 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.2982212813 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.3 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250607951328 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973702545689 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667545317771 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144312547748 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867561322283 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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