The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
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The diagram depicts the process of ethanol fuel produced from a corn, a type of biomass. There are clear 7 step by step stages that corn must undergo, from the start of storing, treatment and transporting.
Initially, corn is the main source of ethanol fuel, all the corn that harvested will store in a clean and dry storage. Portion of the corn will be transferred to milling machine, once it has been cut into fine pieces, it will cook by adding amount of water and to be cook for 4 hours. From this point, cooked corn will be fermented for 48 hours. After fermentation take place, liquid and solid by product will be separated by using a machine. Liquid by product will only be used for purification and treatment of ethanol fuel that will take 4 hours. After the treatment the fuel will store in a tank, and ready to transport and distribute to other station to use as a fuel.
To sum up, it is evident from the diagram that corn is the end product of ethanol fuel. Fuels undergo tremendous stages of treatment to manufacture a high quality of fuel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'steps'?
Suggestion: steps
...n, a type of biomass. There are clear 7 step by step stages that corn must undergo, ...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...n, a type of biomass. There are clear 7 step by step stages that corn must undergo, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51041666667 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48319001264 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2242538924 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191874710173 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104694950036 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880726275357 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175648006574 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056556953064 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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